Teen Poetry #6 |
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Think What You Want, But Only I Know |
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mara New Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 4 |
It's nice to know that you're rooting for me to fail so my attitude toward everything, should just be"oh well" I used to think you thought I was smart but I know you don't, and that just hurts me to mu heart. When I do good things, its like you don't care But when I do bad, you make sure that you're aware I try and try to make it a better day but like always, you got something negative to say. From now on, I can see where you're coming from I know you'll just look at me as if im dumb But that's ok because I still love you even though I wonder if you really do. Mara |
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Taurus42285 New Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 7 |
short and sweet straight to point good poem |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
mara~ I can feel the hurt in this piece. You've expressed it so well and it touched my heart. Very nice job on this. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
i really like this.. it was very good at getting to the point and please dont let anybody get you down... just love and move on!! i really enjoyed this one.. RxyFxy04 |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, this was really good! ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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