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Teen Poetry #6

Rooster/Duck

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-01-07 10:05 AM

The rooster is threatened
The duck approached
Before the battle,
The duck ate 600 roaches
The rooster pecked him
so he lost his "lunch"
The rooster sat on the duck
until he heard a big crunch
CRUNCH! CRUNCH!!

-Stinky Twinkie sucks at poetry-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (01-07-2003 10:06 AM).]

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

1 posted 2003-01-07 10:08 AM

ummm.. this one flowed a lil better than the emu one.. i liked it.. how bout your next subject being on sticky tack on the wall! try it!... haha..

RxyFxy04

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

2 posted 2003-01-07 10:08 AM

oh my gosh...that was great. 600 roaches!?? thats just gross. only you could get away with that one.

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

3 posted 2003-01-07 10:13 AM

good job...not...u suck!!!! haha...

good work!!

LIZ

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-01-07 03:55 PM

Stinky Twinkie does NOT suck at poetry! Stinky Twinkie is great, and so is his poetry!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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