Teen Poetry #6 |
She Is Alone |
PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
She hides inside her fears, She is alone with her tears She is afraid of what she might be, She doesn't want anyone to see Inside, her heart is furious with the lies, She is all alone with her cries She hates the life she has made, She wishes her troubles would fade She has been crying for help inside, She has been searching for someplace to confide She knows it isn't fair, "Why Me? Why doesn't anyone care?" Her feelings she will not share, She just needs someone to be there Well, That girl is me, And I can't live in this mise XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was a pretty good poem, I liked it. But I suggest if you want more replies, then you reply to other's poems too. WinterWren |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Wow! I could have wrote that! You just described every feeling that I have ever had! This was a great poem and I could relate to it emensly(spelling?)! I really like the way that you write your style really speaks to me, I also loved your other one...Midnight Masqurade I think it was called..Keep it up! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
OMG!.. please get help! ... if you are ok. then you do good with expressing unknown feelings... RxyFxy04 |
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stephanie Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 33 |
ive read only two of your poems and both have been very upsetting..the first was about suicide and i know you said you were ok and then i read this one about how your life sucks...sounds like you are pretty sad and are going through some rough times so i just wanted to say that i hope you talk to someone about all these emotions you are feeling and i hope that everything becomes better for you. |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
WOW....if I were you...i would REALLY consider talking to someone about all this stuff...life shouldnt really be THAT hard or THAT horrible...think about it! LUV YA!! LIZ live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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Taurus42285 New Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 7 |
that poem was kind of dark but i understand where u're coming from. just remember there is always somebody who cares whether u know it or not |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
This poem is a little old, so don't worry, I am fine, promise! The other poem isn't anything to worry about...I'm good! promise XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
i liked it, if your past this stage then it's even better cause it's something u can look back on and be like i've come along way from this. |
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