Teen Poetry #6 |
Falling Apart |
blondie83 New Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 2mass |
Falling apart Way back when they’re four sisters They loved each other so much One of them had a child and changed everything We loved her and still do A couple years later our dad died of cancer We became closer it was so hard A couple years later a huge break up would begin Every night I pray that one-day we can be a family again Have our memories No more fights Just love ----------- Hey it's Min, I haven't written any poems in a while but here's one its sad. iF aLl mY fRiEnDs wErE tO jUmP oFf a BrIdgE, i'D bE aT tHe BoTtOm tO cAtCh ThEm AlL |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
Not bad. Not bad at all. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
WELCOME! Very Very Nice work and i hope everything works out fine and hey if ya ever need someone to talk to my email is branden726@chartermi.com that goes for anyone else 2. Great poem. I liked it nice for a first post. |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! great first post.. enjoy your stay, we hope you stay long!! |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Great Poem! It was so sad. Welcome to Passions! Hope to read more from you...if you ever need to talk... email me: JMGCat1985@aol.com -Jeanette- |
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blondie83 New Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 2mass |
thank you all for replying to me. my email is cutelildevil20021983@hotmail.com iF aLl mY fRiEnDs wErE tO jUmP oFf a BrIdgE, i'D bE aT tHe BoTtOm tO cAtCh ThEm AlL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
blondie83~ It's a sad thing when this happens to a family. You've expressed this very well, and if it is written from personal experience, then I hope things work out for you and your sisters and the rest of your family. I enjoyed reading this first post and I hope to see lots more from you. Welcome. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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