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blondie83
New Member

since 2002-12-30

Posts 2
mass

0 posted 2002-12-30 04:38 PM

Falling apart

Way back when they’re four sisters
They loved each other so much
One of them had a child and changed everything
We loved her and still do

A couple years later our dad died of cancer
We became closer it was so hard
A couple years later a huge break up would begin

Every night I pray that one-day we can be a family again
Have our memories
No more fights
Just love

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Hey it's Min, I haven't written any poems in a while but here's one its sad.

iF aLl mY fRiEnDs wErE tO jUmP oFf a BrIdgE, i'D bE aT tHe BoTtOm tO cAtCh ThEm AlL

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

1 posted 2002-12-30 10:45 PM

Not bad. Not bad at all.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

2 posted 2002-12-31 05:35 PM

WELCOME! Very Very Nice work and i hope everything works out fine and hey if ya ever need someone to talk to my email is [email protected] that goes for anyone else 2. Great poem. I liked it nice for a first post.

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

3 posted 2002-12-31 11:54 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

great first post.. enjoy your stay, we hope you stay long!!

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

4 posted 2003-01-02 10:47 AM

Great Poem! It was so sad. Welcome to Passions! Hope to read more from you...if you ever need to talk... email me: [email protected]

-Jeanette-

blondie83
New Member

since 2002-12-30

Posts 2
mass

5 posted 2003-01-02 10:51 PM

thank you all for replying to me. my email is [email protected]

iF aLl mY fRiEnDs wErE tO jUmP oFf a BrIdgE, i'D bE aT tHe BoTtOm tO cAtCh ThEm AlL

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-01-18 05:01 PM

blondie83~
It's a sad thing when this happens to a family.
You've expressed this very well, and if it is
written from personal experience, then I hope
things work out for you and your sisters and
the rest of your family.
I enjoyed reading this first post and I hope
to see lots more from you.
Welcome.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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