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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2003-01-12 10:26 PM

Am I crazy?
I just don`t understand
Why
You hate me so bad
You scream and you yell
I ask you this
Do you find joy
In tearing me down?
Why is it that everything
That I do
Just seems like it is never
Good enough for you?
I think the only reason
That you love me
Is because you are supposed to

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2003-01-13 08:39 PM

OMG this was awesome!!!!AHHHHH I LUVED IT MAN!!WHERE IS EVERYONE THIS IS AWESOME!!!!IT IS THE BEST EVER I DIDNT EVEN SEE IT OVER THERE AAHHHH IT IS AWESOME!!GOOD JOB MAN!!
###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2003-01-14 05:01 PM

Hey, at least they DO love you. My mom won't cook or do my laundry anymore.. and we haven't talked in a while, since we last fought.. but yea, i'm sorry to be so selfish... god i'm a bad person.
Anyway, though.. I really liked this. Family really stinks, and if for some reason, someone doesn't know it yet, and comes across this, I think they'll have an idea for what they're in for.
Good Job!

(mine's numb, lol)

ttyl!

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2003-01-14 09:17 PM

hey,
this was awesome!!!!!
i'm glad my mom still does my laundry, otherwise i wouldnt have clena clothes!! lol
but anywayz...
this was realllllllly good!!!
it sux when u feel like this, but u CAPTURED (i just said captured) this idea in a good way.(hope i used that word in the right way lol)
this pome was by far one of ur best!!!!
~samantha~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-01-18 05:05 PM

devinechild~
This is such a sad and emotional write.
This reached in and touched me deeply and
if this is written from your personal experience,
then I sincerely hope that things get better for you.
Whatever you do, keep writing it out...it helps.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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