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CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

0 posted 2002-12-30 12:47 PM

**This is a poem I found in my diary that I wrote in July**

Why must it always hurt so bad
to give away something you never had?
And why must the world seem so unkind
When you've lost something we could never find?
And how come we suffer so much pain
To only let it come again?

Maybe it's because we know inside
That there are things in which we should confide
That lost pieces of us aren't lost at all
And we can easily climb over the wall
That trust and love is alll we need
And that alone is worth the pain we recieve

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

[This message has been edited by CloudedDreams (12-30-2002 01:40 PM).]

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2002-12-30 01:49 PM

Well back in July you wrote a wonderful piece, It's cleary opened a doorway for me to look at what you said in a new perspective. This poem made me think (i'll forgive you for that) and its just cleared a vision for me i guess.

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-12-30 10:13 PM

That was a very nice piece of poetry. It's really deep and emotional.

-Stinky Twinkie-

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2003-01-02 11:30 PM

What precious and valuable insights... I loved this!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2003-01-03 02:32 AM

nice perspective. I'm the worst person I've met...yet this poem touch me a special way...maybe...someday I can be less selfish and actually love someone...good write!

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

5 posted 2003-01-03 02:42 AM

wow I really like that poem it is very deep and touching it makes you think you are very talented keep writing I love it!!
~Bella~

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

6 posted 2003-01-03 04:12 AM

That is so true and written so beautifully!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

7 posted 2003-01-03 05:33 PM

Keep writing like this, and you ARE going to be famous! *smiles* You've seemingly found the answer to a question that has plagued so many people in their lives, including myself. I think I'm always going to remember this peice, because although I may not have interpreted it the exact way you meant it (or maybe I did), it gave me insight into myself, and why I do the things I do. I thank you for that.
*~Rich~*

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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