You're The Song ( I'm Too Shy To Sing )

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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-12-25 11:05 PM

" You're The Song ( I'm Too Shy To Sing ) "
(26/12/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Like coffee and cigarettes on a sunday morning,
The first sip of you just takes me away.
Lots have tried and more have failed to be all that you are
A true Marilyn Monroe of today...

Refrain
You're the song I'm too shy to sing,
The paradise they say don't excist.
You're more then a simple feel-ing,
The true meaning of the word bliss.
You're my one reason for breath-ing,
Anything else then a great risk.
( You're the song I'm too shy to sing. )
You're the song I'm too shy to sing.

Verse 2
I can eat a good dinner at a fine restaurant,
But It'll never taste as good as you.
A sunset is beautiful like candy to my eye,
But doesn't move me the way that you do.

Refrain

Tag
You're the song I'm too shy to sing
( Repeat till fade )

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-12-26 12:26 PM

Awww How sweet! I would love it if someone sang me that song! It was very nice. I loved the whole idea of being the song you are too shy to sing. That was vey good. You should become a professional song writer! LOL
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

[This message has been edited by devinechild22 (12-26-2002 12:27 AM).]

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

2 posted 2002-12-26 01:29 AM

this song reminds me of "nothing compares 2 u" by sinead o'conner, the lines=
"I can eat my dinner at a fancy restaurant
but nothing, i said nothing can take away these blues, coz nothing compares, nothing compares to you...."

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

3 posted 2002-12-26 10:28 AM

this is really nice. I love the way you write!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2002-12-26 08:19 PM

Coffe and cigarettes, bleh. But that's just my personal opinion. I really like this song too, when am I going to hear some of yours on the radio?

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-27 05:08 PM

Brian~
This is such a sweet love song.
Another of my favorites from you.
Your talent is showing.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

6 posted 2003-05-05 06:14 PM

I bet a certain special someone out there is as red as a tomato right now.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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