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Teen Poetry #6

Jerk

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

0 posted 2003-04-09 10:54 PM

He's lied to me,
he's made me cry,
He's a playa,
but he's one of a kind.
I fell in love,
but i guess i was wrong.
Now i see that
he was a jerk all along!

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2003-04-10 10:08 AM

This made me think about a girl smacking a guy in the face! Short, Not so sweet, and too the point! I loved it.

And being a guy myself I know that most of them are Jerks, even me.

Good job!
Darkness

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-04-10 03:13 PM

The story of my life in a short poem,(and somehow I still haven't totally given up yet), nice job

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

3 posted 2003-04-11 10:43 AM

(L)       Very short, but also very sweet...
Nice way of making your point without making it to long with a  big storie...
I know how you feel, Most of them are jerk but hopfully you find that one special love and that will be then end to your search.....

Best wishes..
Ashgiel
(L)

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2003-04-16 03:53 PM

wow...sure hope no one writes stuff like that about me. "I fell in love, but I guess I was wrong"....really felt that line. Fact is, real love is never wrong, it's wrong when it goes sour.

J.H.

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

5 posted 2003-05-03 04:07 PM

Very like you Holly, hope to see sommo

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

6 posted 2003-05-05 06:09 PM

Unfortunately, the world has no end of jerks in it.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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