The Night My Heart Was Slain

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-12-20 06:47 PM

Only you can see
This hurt I feel inside
I'm caught in this riptide
They watch with simple glee
I can’t escape today
Or deal with tomorrow
Such a deep sorrow
The sea won’t give-way
I guess it’s no use
But I want you to know
That before I let go
And before my heart lets loose
How much I loved you
And how much I cared
No one could’ve compared
After what we went through
I’m wracked with pain
I feel myself getting sucked down
I wish you were around
This night my heart was slain

Puritanism: The haunting fear that someone, somewhere, may be happy.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-20 08:38 PM

That was a really powerful poem! WOw, that was just soo good, there's another one for my library!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

2 posted 2002-12-20 08:44 PM

I've thought before about the broken heart. It hurts when you lose someone, even more so when you care for them as much as you seem to care for this person. Just remember that a broken heart is much like the mythical Phoenix. It bursts in flames of passion to die, but is also reborn in those same flames. It just takes awhile to mature again.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

3 posted 2002-12-21 07:03 PM

great comparison, aaron, I agree fully with you

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2002-12-21 07:11 PM

thank u, i'm glad u all liked it

Puritanism: The haunting fear that someone, somewhere, may be happy.

Hyper Sensitive
New Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 6
a somnambulist society

5 posted 2002-12-21 08:49 PM

My boyfriend just left me so this poem meant a lot... it's going into my library. Very good write...

-heatherlynne-

"I'm all by myself, the way I wanna be." - Silverchair

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

6 posted 2002-12-22 08:00 PM

"I can’t escape today
Or deal with tomorrow"

Nice job! I especially liked these lines. Oh, and I just wanted to say I like your little signature. I was just talking about it w/ a friend the other day (weird, I know). Just though it was funny. Anywho, nicely done!

*Me*
I'm pasteing my smile back on just to please you... I always knew Elmer's glue was good for something...

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