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DINNER HOG!
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DINNER HOG! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571
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Ok the first part everone will understand but the second only my close friends will so the rest of you dont have to bother reading the bottom..LOL Its kinda funny though..Reminds me of a Stinky Twinkie Poem down there. LOL *Allison* An innocent kiss Thats what it was to be Hidden in the privacy of the stairwell Anticipation ponding in my heart You lips would briefly grace mine And a sweet kiss we would share But the one I thought that I could trust Betrayed me before my moment of lust The moment flashing before my face Was grabbed away before it could happen You want to gain my trust back Although you sit on my table On a a silver plate Apple in mouth Roasted over the fire To be eaten for dinner I will hate you forever for what you`ve done And always you will be known to everyone AS THE FAT DINNER HOG WITH APPLE IN MOUTH! "O My love |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
The beginning was good, and I read the end anyway because Im just that way. And while it's true I didn't quite get all of it, I liked it. WinterWren |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, this was really good! the second part seemed a lil ummm.... idk harsh maybe not sure of the word i am lookin for but u must really be mad at him that was really gay of him tho ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Gosh Sam I thought you and Cathy would think it was funny!LOL You guys say it all the time and yes I am very very very mad at him. Wouldn`t you be? Wren-I didn`t expect people to get the second part. It`s an inside joke so don`t feel bad. LOL *Allison* P.S Sorry if this is "bad writing" But it was just sort of a vent for me. "O My love |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
this is so funny.... yet so sad... very different...but in a good way :P |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
ok yea i am sittin here and i have just heated up some pizza in the oven i didnt put it on anything but t he oven rack and the pizza fell and burned lol!!!!! the smoke detector hasnt gone off.....YET but thatz a relief this was good i could prolly roast that hog here sense i practically burnt my house down!!! FOREVER STUPID(LOL) ###CATHY### "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
LOL Cathy that sux man! But the roasting of the Dinner hog..I feel another feast coming on! LOL *Allison* "O My love |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Interesting to say the least LOL. I really liked the beginning, and I guess I won't say anything about that last stanza, because well... I just won't haha. Thanks for making me smile! *Me* |
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