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Teen Poetry #6

New, But here and Asking Advice

OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

0 posted 2002-12-19 08:43 PM

[This message has been edited by OtherSideOfTheMirror (12-21-2002 03:32 PM).]

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-19 11:51 PM

Wow! That was a truly wonderful poem, I really enjoyed reading! Great first post, your off to a good start. Welcome to passions by the way. I'll be looking out for more of yours.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

LTEvans
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since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

2 posted 2002-12-20 11:58 AM

"It hurt once, it hurt twice
But this third time is concise."

Absolutely brilliant lines and very expressive.
Great first post.

Looking forward to reading more from you.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

LTEvans

aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

3 posted 2002-12-20 08:36 PM

Welcome to Pip. This poem was well thought out and I liked it. I'm pretty partial to sad depressing poems and this was very nice. I really liked this one line.

"Though silence is a disturbing tone."

Silence is the hardest thing to bear when all you want to hear is someone, anyones voice. I enjoyed this alot. Keep it up.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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