Teen Poetry #6 |
Blazing Glory (Challenge #4) |
EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
There's a PVC Christmas tree In our school hall. A forlorn piece of plastic foliage Fake, and feeling it. Synthetic evergreen limbs poke out From mummy-like tinsel bandages. It looks like someone has taken Every bauble known to man And hung it on that tree Now bearing the weight of a thousand orbs. Changes need to be made. I take my lighter from my pocket And take one last look at this tragic figure. There is a soft "snick" as I light up. The first branch just smokes and melts So I hold the lighter to it until I see a flame. For a while It just crackles and smoulders. Then, within a moment It transforms. A torch of liberty. It's beautiful. The next day The janitor finds a solidified pool Of a green universe With gold, red and silver stars Exploded. I think it's an improvement. "I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma" |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
This is GREAT. Humorous and beautiful, a poem with a twist, wonderful! Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I think it's an improvement too. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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