Teen Poetry #6 |
Love??? |
ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Unable to let go Living two different worlds A love i will never know Feelings to be unfurled Only when i see fit Unless my feelings take control Scared, don't wanna risk it Your the mate for my soul Not a feeling, I know That's why it hurts so deep Without you i'm in woe Thinking of you while i sleep Not reality, but a fantasy A mere dream that's reachable Visions of you and me Are becoming more believable |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"Not a feeling, I know That's why it hurts so deep Without you i'm in woe Thinking of you while i sleep" I so feel this. My body can feel it, the snails down the fence can feel it. I know what you're saying in this and its amazing that someone out there can put what I've felt on so many occasions down. It's a great feeling, but then one of the more scary feelings at the same time. I enjoyed this post..hope to read more from you soon. Are you scared? BOO! Are you now? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
It's good to see you finally exploring other forms of rhyme scheme. I think this turned out beautifully. Could you send me an email please? I've got some questions for you. Thanks in advance, Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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