Teen Poetry #6 |
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Fan Assisted |
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LTEvans Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72Lenham, England |
Fan Assisted Firstly life is acid based, Second that does for me, You are a sugar whore, Why does nobody see? Did you know that I am not, Quite like it may seem, Do you ever think about, The way that we are steered. Or the way that we are bred, For food for some other life, Higher than I dreamt, Before I paralysed. |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
This has a bit of a rough flow to it, try to improve that, it has a interesting message, just try to make it go smoother ![]() |
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