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Teen Poetry #6
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LTEvans
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
Lenham, England
0 posted 2002-12-15 11:23 PM

Interlace

Stand broken and heart rent,
Mirrored in limelight,
With your heart on your tongue.

Stand telling truth,
“Dreams of an end pure, and true,
I dream over dreams of you.”

Stand feeling lies,
Where inside my mind,
Hate and matter must intertwine.

Land buckled and half bent,
Dropped like a toy,
After being found irrelevant.

Stand still in stasis,
For their indifferent puppetry,
Their ageist weave to the tapestry,
That is lacing our lives to the cloth.

[This message has been edited by LTEvans (12-16-2002 01:55 AM).]
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CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-12-18 07:35 PM

Very good metaphors..I really like your work
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