Open Poetry #22 |
a woman's plea--in ink of tears |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
When will you learn? (it's not the way) It's true, a heavy foot makes path-- but it kills all that's alive-- the very carpet padding wrath. Like a noisy child on hike-- you wonder: "Where did rabbit run?" [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-31-2002 05:09 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I wonder that too, my children wonder, Where did the pigeon fly? Excellent images Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To its warren... to eat clover another day... smiling here... with tenderness.... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
So much said with so few words, insightful and to the point! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like this miss k...I do I do... nice bit of midnight reading to come across.. huggles K |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
rabbits may startle but they always come back to the clover silly you b |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Interesting Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at you all---sort of a tribute to "the keeper of serenity"--I live with this man, y'see, he acts like a jerk, and then wonders why I hop away---*shake of the head, again* well anyway, this one was for HIM---I thank you all...blowing kisses here! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This one is just such a sweetie, Karen... We have a lot of chipmunks in the woods behind our condo...but we have a solitary one who has his own bachelor pad just under the privacy wall in our little postage stamp front yard. We also have a sundial with a stone chipmunk on it and the other day... he was standing up on the sundial talking angrily (we think) at this little stone chipmunk... He probably was defending his territory against it...or he was trying to mate with it (wow talk about frigid women) Wild animals are always scared of us because they live with so many predators... ~ scared chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Does this guy have a sister? Cause I think I used to live with her...lol. btw, damn good poem! [This message has been edited by Duncan (09-01-2002 12:49 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ya clever gal... enjoyed this Luscious. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nodding with understanding agreement... well said Karen. ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, The rabbit runs to stay alive, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity I've always known you had get up and go. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Inked again? Oh no, say it isn't so! I've missed reading you lately. I always hear a heart beating softly in the background when I read your words. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ser, you always seem to make these points just filled with strength and a bit of tender toughness. I loved this, Lady. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
serenity blaze...If not for your explanation I would have missed this. Maybe you need to " blaze" your own trail and show this fellow two can play the game...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-02-2002 03:08 AM).] |
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