Open Poetry #22 |
A Night Of Pure Passion |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Silky sheets of lilac satin Cover the bed where I lie I'm propped up on some pillows Attempting to catch your eye Rose oil fills our senses A perfect mood has been set As you move your body closer For a night we won't forget The velvety texture of the satin Slides down the length of my thighs As I've captured your attention And feel your temperature rise Our bed of love is smouldering From the candlelight all around The room is filled with love Here so much passion can be found Tender kisses on my shoulders Warm breath on my skin These feelings are exquisite They must surely be a sin I tilt your head towards me And taste your lips so divine My flame of love is burning In our love light how we shine We move so well together As our hearts join as one Love will flow long after midnight Until we wake to greet the sun I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (09-01-2002 11:07 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're giving me the vapours! You write so hot it's enough to make me consider changing my sexual orientation! Well, I may have exaggerated that a bit----but you get the picture!----It was a very enjoyable experience reading your poem---on many levels! Ha! Ha! Linda |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Suetang... Such softly spoken words of love. Very enjoyable. I feel the need for a cold shower after reading this. LOL...Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may sweet love always fill your heart and make you happy always every night and day! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"We move so well together As our hearts join as one Love will flow long after midnight Until we wake to greet the sun" I wish I had written that myself, Sue, this is so beautiful! |
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