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Open Poetry #22

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-01 04:51 PM

Spared

you are
the reason
love poems
are written
you cast
a spell
formed to
be smitten
affected by
breathing the
same breath
resituating my
hurt heart
past death
yes you
are a
sweet rhyme
magic show
salvation now
on time

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-01 04:55 PM

fascinating, and quite a twist at the end, unless I'm missing something

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-09-01 05:02 PM

helen - breath taking your words...

BC

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-09-01 11:22 PM

I've been a few weeks without a computer, and I miss reading you. Its a great treasure to have again, slick one.

sighing here

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

4 posted 2002-09-01 11:46 PM

"salvation now on time"
I loved this line, Helen.
You never seem to stop surprising me.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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