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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-09-01 12:37 PM

Charismatic Charisma

In white of silvered slivered moon
I think of thee
as you drape charisma
for all to see

~ slightly influentially ~

powerful in your
quiet roar
you feign some interest
~ nothing more

except

Thy forceful impact
of your thoughts
succumbs in their reign
as your words are read
again, and again

As your entreaties
of appeal
beckon with
seductive zeal

and with crook of
charm, compel
the strongest of women
to retell
of your write
and of your words
then read again
and wonder when
this vigorous force
will take it's course
directly into their heart

Ahhh….

thus, 'tis you. The upbeat stroke
that you provoke
of thy heart,
thy active stance
of promised romance
might one
simply take a chance
is heartily imparted.

Thus, 'tis you.

Now while thee may
not be
glamour bound, but
sometimes clown,
it can be said
the potency in
which you wrap your
words, you see,
is the charismatic
chemistry
and thus
the ink of thee.

~*~
28 December 2000
revised, slightly
1 September 2002

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-09-01 12:48 PM

I love your use of alliteration in this poem. You have a unique style of writing that I enjoy reading!

Linda

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-01 12:50 PM

"Now while thee may
not be
glamour bound, but
sometimes clown,
it can be said
the potency in
which you wrap your
words, you see,
is the charismatic
chemistry
and thus
the ink of thee."

(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautiful, I love it, your words are always so charismatic and flow with such grace beyond grace! (smiles) This is another wonderful classic to again be read, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-01 01:51 PM

Oh yes...oh my yes, Karilea!
Your words still leave me speechless...
Marvelous write m'dear!
~Hugs~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-01 01:53 PM

This is beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

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