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In my Perhaps
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In my Perhaps |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In my Perhaps It is in the soft light of tiffany lamp meditation meets quiet, reflection greets wisdom, in my perhaps, lies hope. In my perhaps, are many opportunities as so many more possibilities lie within, many more so than just maybe, or even, we’ll see. A soft promise that indicates kismet is just around the corner, where serenity awaits, perchance it be today, or in whim of tomorrow’s fancy. Perhaps seems more a pledge, awaiting blood’s ties to thoughtful reverence. Perhaps is akin to a slip stream of expect, awaiting with trust that wishes shall be fulfilled. In my Perhaps rests the underlying encouragement that all things shall be as ever was and if asked what aura surrounds my perhaps, trust me… it is orb-hued green. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I see a twinkle in the eye of your "perhaps" very nice exploration of the possibilities of "perhaps" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I love it when you explore all possibilities of a simple word made marvelous through your own. Perhaps....yep..I love that word. Sincerely, Reg |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Love the hope in this!  Shenachie |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful, dear Sunshine... Perhaps more than you know! *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A soft promise that indicates kismet is just around the corner, where serenity awaits, perchance it be today, or in whim of tomorrow’s fancy. ------------------- AND...perhaps as though that were not enough.. ------------------- if asked what aura surrounds my perhaps, trust me… it is orb-hued green. --------------- Okay Karilea...stop it with the goosebumps now okay? Perhaps...what a beautiful word... perhaps as lovely as kismet, or serenity. *Smiling at you girlie* ~Hugs YOU!~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Perhaps.......such a lovely word filled with hope....... PERHAPS........beautiful Karilea. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Perhaps....perhaps... Love it definitely! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
purrrrrrhaps done perrrrrfectly ms sunshine. you bad!! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Perhaps has never been more a word of encouragement as it is here. It gives me hope. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
"Perhaps seems more a pledge, awaiting blood’s ties to thoughtful reverence." I enjoyed your thoughts. I love the word "kismet" Essorant. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
You poetry shows maturity of style.You were very good at putting light ideas, into a tangeable form.No slight of hand, i call it slight of mind. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Your perhaps is lovely thoughts all wrapped up in word lace and tied with velvet ribbon...and even though I can't see it, I know it is beautiful, and green. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Just what I need! Thank you Sunshine! What a hopegiving poem!  Neeraja |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"In my Perhaps rests the underlying encouragement that all things shall be as ever was and if asked what aura surrounds my perhaps, trust me… it is orb-hued green."   Wow!!! Oh Karilea, this is just wonderful, I LOVE IT, and I know that inevitably perhaps is you and I can see much more promises bound to come true before your very eyes as amends shall be made! (sigh) This is wonderfully written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Perhaps.. Upon the dawn the light of day the moment of two hearts sway Perhaps.. Into the night as forest still filters the moon of wishes will.. Perhaps.. from moments of two hearts in beat where once is found a love complete.. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Wonderful words of hope to begin the day! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sunshine, Perhaps one day I can write this good. Juanita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know this feeling! "In my perhaps, are many opportunities as so many more possibilities lie within, many more so than just maybe," I haven't been around for a while and this is the first time I've seen the accompanying picture....even more attractive than I envisioned! Well, that's my compliment for the day and I wanted to make sure it didn't get wasted! Eric |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea, I am so glad that I wandered into Pip to-day to finish my cup of tea. I needed to read a poem such as this. Wouldn't you know it....it was written by you!!! Thankyou for this wonderful piece that is going directly into my library. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great poem Karilea. A picture, too! Hey, everybody, the mysterious Karilea has revealed herself! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea ~~ How nice to see you! You're beautiful. And I'd like to go to your 'Perhaps.' Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
trust me… it is orb-hued green. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I was so pleased to see so many touch upon this poem, and to hear that so many were touched BY this poem... thank you all. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
An aberrant thought popped into my brain when I first saw the title... and I had to shake it before I could truly appreciate your poem. *G* Just think of Ron's soon ... you'll see what I mean. LOL This is beautiful, Sunshine... I like the gentle promise of your perhaps very much. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (08-20-2002 03:09 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- Do I love this? Perhaps. Okay...no perhaps about it...I LOVE IT! Your perhaps is making me smile tonight. Thank you for that. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You write such beautiful thoughts, Karilea! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is quite unique, spellbinding, and truly sparked some intropection. Your mind works in beautiful ways Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Sunshiny Girl this is excellent, a devine piece with such a pleasing flow and soft essence within it, well penned, I enjoyed very much. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Green - a wonderful color - full of promise, yet not. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Perhaps... Perhaps.... Perhaps... Oh this is so meaningful to me, Karilea and so beautifully written Thanks for sharing it ~ big thank you hugsLyra |
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since 2000-01-03
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
GREEN. as good a color as any. i'm unfamiliar with this aura color thing. but.. (sigh) nevertheless, your work continues to speak in volumes i aspire to understand |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
this is darling- I am also a big user of the word perhaps, so I appreciate your musing of it. O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song... |
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