Open Poetry #22 |
Home (200th post) |
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Four White Walls trimmed in blue Stand tall in a lawn of green a ways away a white picket fence to me this would be home Outside the wooden front door a welcome mat sits flower pots upon each stepthe walkway clear Just inside the front door cedar floors shiney and new Walls shimmering white Chandelier above your head Directly in front of you Sadie barks Roll over you say Here is where the home is This is my home I do not really live there That is my home in my heart And if it had looks thats what it would look like or is it just the idolized idea |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
congrads on 200 posts hope you post a lot more seems a nice place, is that you dream home? If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so good to have dreams. I've found the trick to making them come true, is to turn them into goals. Nice write, Kellie! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kellie, Listen to Sunshine. She is a brilliant woman! And Congratulations on 200! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Aww. Larry all of the people on this board are wonderful and all the stars in the sky could never show how much I truly love each one of you. Hugs Kel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kellie, that's a very inviting home you have. I liked those flower pots, on every step. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Flowers make me happy. So does poetry. I am very good at hiding my emotion and I really wish I could let it shine through. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
This is Beautiful....enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kellie, congrats on the 200 mark....keep writing...and I too remember a place somewhat like your own.....wish it were really there.... |
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