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Calm Storm
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Calm Storm |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Winds of both joy and loss echo within my heart Women I care for have found their only missing part Love has come to each of them and this is the joy I feel Love has come to each of them and with this loss I reel Faith sustains me in this storm because of what I know There comes a time soon for me when I shall also glow |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
"Winds of both joy and loss echo within my heart" This is how I often feel. The poem made me feel better. That I am not alone. and hopefully no one will leave me alone. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Wonderful writing; I enjoyed this very much. Hugs, Marti |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
I'm no poet. I've only just begun to give it a go, and I've read many here that are completely over my head but I really liked yours and can feel the flow of poems like this. So I would like to give my humble suggestions and if I get bashed...thats ok too. so here goes... Winds of change, both joy and loss echo here within my heart Women that I've cared for now have found their missing part Love has come to each of them and this the joy I feel Love has come to each of them and with this loss I reel Faith sustains me in this storm because of what I know There comes a time so soon for me when I shall also glow (i think this would also sound good with "grow") Hope I didn't offend anyone....forgive me, I'm new (^_~) Julie |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Nice work...enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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