Open Poetry #22 |
Eternity |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~eternity~ Tell me a story one I'll never forget a story of a time when you and I first met long ago way back in time many moons before a love story, a tale of love one that will be remembered forever more I long to hear that story the way you remembered it to be the story of two lovers the story of you and me whisper in my ear all those forget-me-knots of time the flowers smelled so lovely the roses sent with rhyme you always said "precious words should be said with passion" which is why you told me you loved me in your very own fashion you sent to me a posy all tied up with bows and in amongst the flowers the poem you did compose the words were ever so beautiful they melted my heart in two and from that first love poem my heart surely knew that we belonged together your words they did inspire they filled my heart and soul with an everlasting desire forever in love forever our love will be our love is one word our love ~eternity~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good old-fashioned feel about this, Tracie...I'm smiling, especially at the "posy"... thanks for this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Tracie, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love, the cute imagery made me smile like a little boy as true smiles shine in your words! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tracie, this is so elegant and lovely and a true testament to your love. Just wonderful.... If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
tracie66 A beautiful write, enjoyed. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Truly beautiful.Inspiring. |
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