Open Poetry #22 |
Twin Moons |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The red waters had crested with the twin moons The atmosphere of caustic gases lit the skies In an aurora the planets magnetic charges excited the sky On a pedestal on a crystal outlay we observed the magnificence In a crystal ball protected from the hostile environment A palace of no exterior walls In force fields entrapping its occupants Gravitating in the special needs of its visitors Here the fire eagle could be found In flaming red eyes that penetrates the sky Visionary entities that have been blessed in tranquil serenity Hovering on silent gases they float before the captive audience Visiting within the minds in pure wisdom Sending hypnotic thoughts caressing the sensual peace of living The knowledge they evoke sends shivers of awareness Appearing for those special enough to imagine their purpose in life Then in a whisper so silent they would disappear Leaving you thrilled to perfection In a fireplace that sends aromatic light we cuddle Immersing in the hallucinogenic effects of our being For this honeymooned in seclusion Was worth traveling light years to get Thought: Sometimes you want to create a universe far off so that you can create a new world of images. D.Lester Young (08/24/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, that would certainly be a honeymoon in seclusion...provided there is no life on that 'other planet.' Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A delight in the imagination. Nice imagery. I'm booking a flight. Enjoyed the read. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
This was really vivid.Excellent imagery! |
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