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Soul Muse... (15,000th Post)
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Soul Muse... (15,000th Post) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is for my sweet Joanna, who I love everyday from the bottom of my heart so deeply!  ) Soul Muse By: Noah Eaton 8/12/02 October days I used to sit on the porch Counting ravens but continuously mistaking them for crows I thought love was something that just wasn't meant for me All my instincts tossed around like broken bows Now I can't explain why but I know everythings changed Caught a second wind and I can hold that savoir-faire I feel Saturday Night fever even on a Wednesday When I smell the apples and sunflowers in your hair All for one and one for all some may say It takes some time to realize now I know I can agree I swear love has its own unorthodox syntax I mistake reality with fantasy so very easily In your loving arms I feel the sun But I never get burned and I don't go blind I feel weak yet I feel strong feeling your love Tasting your bubblegum tongue is a feeling so divine Like a satyr your wings wear the eyes of my soul Kissing the lightbulb of my heart And you're always attracted to me With one destiny One dream... Two hearts, two souls With one destiny One love... For both you and me... Soul Muse, suckle your wine with me... When you toss your hair and reflect your sunrise smile You're like a dayflower that never wilts A davit that holds my ship safely to the shore Come here sweetie, I'll show you the seven seas Like the peregrine falcon we will soar Your love defies all perfection of feng shui Princess, from your balcony jump and fall into me We'll make potpourri of Arsenic and Old Lace Wear this technicolor dreamcoat and taste lifes giant peach Like a peacock your many eyes hypnotize Glowing with a ruby mercy to an amethyst prowess And when you kiss my lips so softly And wrap your arms around me I hear your soul say "Noah, you're my sweet bay-bee!" And I say "Joanna, I'll always love you and show you everything!" With one destiny One dream... Two hearts, two souls With one destiny One love... Two hearts, one symphony Two hearts, one epiphany Two hearts, one creed Two hearts, one everything For both you and me... You are my Madonna My Dionysus My Alpha and Omega My heart, my soul, my zen and body Soul Muse, suckle your wine with me... Soul Muse, embrace me lovingly... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-13-2002 12:15 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations Noah...on 15,000 and an absolutely lovely poem  ~ 15,000 hugsLyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Noah, you wise spirit you: 15,000 posts is inspiring to us. I know, we all leave a small piece of us behind with each reply that describes the way a poem affects us. For you to give that much of ourselves....sigh The Paradise that grows inside of you is a delight for others to walk in, Noah. jeff |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Noah, a most charming 15,000 post! Congratulations! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is an outstanding poem Noah. Most fitting for your 15,000th post. It is a lovely work of art filled with your spirit and your love. You have touched my life in just the short time I have been here and I feel enriched for having known you and am more so each time I read your verse. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Congratulations Noah, my sidekick, on 15,000 Posts! You are always here to bring so much cheer to everyone.. This is a beautiful post to mark this milestone. ~Smiles, Hugs & Cheers~ |
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mestesa78 Junior Member
since 2002-08-12
Posts 24 |
ahhh..... the serenity of love to spring forth life into those who open themselves to it. Love your work.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah....congrats on the 15k... and this was love stuff done in caddy chrome. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Congrats on 15000 Noah - what an accomplishment and what a wonderful poem you honor us with - always enjoy your poems and replies - thanks - Paul |
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mestesa78 Junior Member
since 2002-08-12
Posts 24 |
Oh...!!! I forgot to thank you for the email you sent me. I loved it, it was the best welcoming I could have gotten. Thank you so much. By the way I love your work.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
CONGRATULATIONS NOAH! 15,000 POSTS! Quite a remarkable accomplishment and this poem is perfect for the occasion. Hugs my friend, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Congrads and the poem could not be nicer. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"I feel Saturday Night fever even on a Wednesday When I smell the apples and sunflowers in your hair" I loved those lines. Congratulations, my friend. You bring so much encouragement and joy to our family. Thank you for you!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So many posts, Noah, and every one of them secial. Hugs Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah, one, this is very lovely for Joanna and your sharing of heart in this is beautiful, and two, congratulations on a very wonderful accomplishment. Kudos to you! somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Noah, I think you have outdone yourself here... congradulations on 15 big ones.... and what a gorgeous write to go with it!!!! And I appreciate all the times you have directed some of those posts toward my rantings... Thankyou for being you. Love ya cutiepie!!! Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Congratulations on a lovely write Noah....and on 15,000....I MIGHT get that many post in my whole life! jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This has to be the best poem you have ever written Noah...enjoyed...congratulations on 15,000...James |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
I'm new to PIP, and reading your poem, I think I'll fit in here! i love your sense of humor, and you have some amazing lines... I had a few favorites: In your loving arms I feel the sun But I never get burned and I don't go blind I feel weak yet I feel strong feeling your love Tasting your bubblegum tongue is a feeling so divine that is so great... congrats on all your posts, and a seemingly great relationship. looking forward to reading more of yours, Jessica  *We are the hero in our own story* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, this is outstanding! You write some of the best romantic poetry. I love this line: "' I swear love has its own unorthodox syntax I mistake reality with fantasy so very easily" Please keep making those "mistakes," for the rest of us to enjoy. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - wow my friend, you write of amore. Lovely romantic... BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah Congratulations! This poem is so filled up with love and passion...most beautiful!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I can hardly believe you've made 15,000, but then, considering how faithful you are to responding to the poetry of others, it really should come as no surprise! Congrats on your accomplishments! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 15,000th POST!!! Wow Noah! This poem is breathtaking! Certainly this is one of your best. Hugs, Deb |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
way to go, Noah, congratulations!!! SS |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
congrats i am glad you are happy |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Noah, WAY TO GO MY YOUNG FRIEND....CONGRATS ON 15,000. Wanda |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
couldn't resist, one of my favorites! SS |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is pure romance, congrats on your 15,000 WOW!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your wonderful comments re my poems on my very first day in Passions are even more special since you wrote them on such an auspiscious day---the day of your 15,000th posting! You're 14,999 postings ahead of me! I have some catching up to do! This poem touched my heart. You truly have the soul of a poet and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
CONGRATULATIONS NOAH! You wouldn't be in love, would you ??? ;-) 15,000 That is a milestone...Be proud, because we are all proud of you. Love to you and your Joanna...(hugs) Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. Congrats Noah!!!!!!!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Dear Noah~ How wonderful to honor your muse with your 15,000 post... you are a sweet man. I love to watch your imagery pour forth! Indigo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah This was such a beautiful declaration of the love you hold dearly for sweet Joanna. Congratulations on you 15,000th post. You never cease to amaze me, my friend. Here is a little something for you : "We drop like pebbles into the ponds of each other's souls" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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