Open Poetry #22 |
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In Remembrance |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
In rememberance comes pain tears in drops like rain, a gray sort of feeling waiting for the healing. The heart is not ready the thoughts too heavy, to give up their hold until the story's told. Again and again the movie plays on end, romance glorified While I am horrified. Forgetfulness won't come I guess it does for some, instead a specter haunting incessant in it's taunting. I beg for lapse of thought just a moment soft in peace without the cry let this memory finally die. WhiteRose Touch me with your whispers, |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
I beg for lapse of thought just a moment soft in peace without the cry let this memory finally die I truly love this verse and can totally relate. Amazing. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Now how am I supposed to keep up with all the poems you are putting out I am new to this instead of speed reading I think I will buy some speed typing books I really do enjoy all your poems I can relate to a lot of them Thomas |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The heart is not ready the thoughts too heavy, to give up their hold until the story's told. Very true and very much enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel the sadness and pain of this one. You know where I am. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Anne I could feel the pain and sorrow through your words and I guess some things we just can't block out of our mind, they keep resurfacing. I hope you are okay. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This was a wonderful piece and all I could think about when I was reading it was September 11th. Some things we just can't forget. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Seems like you've spoken my thoughts today, WhiteRose. This is such a keeper! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is too true, too true, and I am relating well right now...gotta push this one through again |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Dixie, I'm still there. Remembering, though the thoughts are now faded and few. Thanks for the *bump* |
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