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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-21 10:19 PM



Morning Sighs In Silhouette
~*Marge Tindal*~


Morning sighs in silhouette
Sun is on the rise
Backdrop of a leftover moon
curtsies before my eyes~


As night in sleepy abandon
gives in to break of day
Moon surrounds new greet of eve
half-a-world away~



~My thanks to Titia for the sunrise photo
and to Vicky for the moon photo~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-21 10:26 PM


Beautiful words and lovely pictures to accompany.
Well done Margie girl!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-08-21 10:59 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Marge. I love the pictures. And, the poem is just perfect.
Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-21 11:20 PM


"backdrop of a leftover moon"...
oh so well said, Marge
~ evening hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-08-21 11:45 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart, once again your stunning words married in perfect harmony to the images create such a perfect poem. I love it utterly utterly as you just knew I would. Truly exquisite darling heart absolutely perfect writing that flows in delight and wonder down the page.

Really wonderful writing
  

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
Xxxx
Counting the days now

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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5 posted 2002-08-22 04:19 PM


Marge:  Lovely thoughts and pictures!  You always amaze me, at the artistry you show to match each photo!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-08-22 04:21 PM


You simply amaze me Marge. Another lovely work of art, both picture and words.
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7 posted 2002-08-22 04:36 PM


Perfection Marge! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2002-08-22 04:38 PM


Ya know, I see these lil gems and I smile......
thank you lady.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2002-08-22 04:48 PM



Beautiful Marge and thanks for using one of my pics. I love to see them used in some others poetry.

HUGS, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-08-22 05:14 PM


Marge,
The title alone is a poem. Wonderful write.

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11 posted 2002-08-22 08:42 PM


Beautifully romantic pictures enhanced by the wonder of your words. I enjoyed this very much.

Gosh, I hope you're having a better day today...

Thinking of you, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

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12 posted 2002-08-22 09:56 PM


You are one AMAZING poetess, Marge.  This is more than lovely!!

marie

Keep counting your blessings

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13 posted 2002-08-23 05:37 AM



Marge-
Okay, pick yourself up off the floor.
Yes!  It's really me!
You KNEW I couldn't let this one go by
without replying, didn't you?
Thanks for using my photo.  I actually
had forgotten that I sent you that one.
Of course, you make it MUCH more beautiful
by putting your words to it.
Sorry I haven't been around in awhile.
I really AM trying to remedy that.
Thank you for being patient with me.
You ARE being patient, aren't you?? LOL
Love you bunches,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-08-23 07:46 PM


Thank you all so much~
Sorry I've not been here as often as I'd like to be ... a little 'under-the-weather'~

Enchantress~
Thank you dear~

SweetSue~
Always nice to have your sweet comments on my pieces~

Lyra~
You picked my second-favorite thought~
Thank you~

MarshaLove~
Thank you sweetheart ... I'm counting them too~
LOL @ your little packages arriving~
What fun we're going to have~
I love you~

BettyLou~
Thank you so much~
It's such a pleasure sharing with you~

WhiteRose~
Thank you hon ... they just seem to write themselves~

GentleSpirit~
To give you a *smile* is a pleasure to me~

Titia~
Nobody ... but nobody could capture the sun so BURSTING~
Beautiful photo ... and it fit my thoughts perfectly~

Seymour~
Thank you so much ... the title came swooping across the dawn and captured me in it's beauty~
I am so grateful to my dear friends, Titia and Vicky for giving me the lovely photos to present with it~

Marti~
I've certainly had better days ... but all in all - it's a great day to be a poet~
Thank you sweetie~

MyCafe~
Thank you SO MUCH ... that's a lovely compliment~

Vicky~
Now ... if it takes an Arizona moon to get you here ... it's well worth the effort~
I'm not only being patient WITH you ...
I am A PATIENT !

After writing this one ... I got to thinking about you one side of my world ... Titia on the other .... me kind of in the middle ... and it just seemed so fitting to marry your photos with my thoughts~
I thank you both for your kindness~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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15 posted 2002-08-24 09:31 PM


Beautiful Marge & I lve the photos.
Love ya,
Betty

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16 posted 2002-08-24 09:37 PM


Marge - what can I say except lovely, just lovely...

BC

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2002-08-24 09:38 PM


Betty~
Hey sweet girlfriend~
Nice of you to drop in from vacation in VA~
Take some pretty pictures for me !!
I'll need the 'inspire'~
Thanks gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2002-08-24 09:40 PM


Thankee, Bill~
You sneaked in under that moon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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19 posted 2002-09-16 12:03 PM


awesome! You know how I love those times of day!
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2002-09-16 04:34 PM


Dixie~
Thank you gal~
I LOVE this write and am so glad to know you enjoyed it too~

Each morning brings such beautiful inspiration ... and then comes the night to tuck it in~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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