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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-08-21 10:11 PM


Life
~By Sue~

Life is not always the sweetest
Sometimes there may be a few bumps
But, if you do the best you can
You can always get over the humps

Do not give up when life gets rough
Keep trying until you succeed
In getting where you want to be
You can plant your own little seed

True, it may be quite a struggle
But, with determination you can win
Even though it may take you a while
You can always get on your feet again

8-17-02



[This message has been edited by SmartChick (08-21-2002 10:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-21 10:21 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, I have missed you so much and am so happy you're back, and I know soon things will look way up to you as with your golden heart all your dreams are bound to come true! (sigh) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-21 10:22 PM


Now that's what I like to hear sweetie!!
YES!!  You are much more positive now!
Hope all is as well as can be expected.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-08-21 10:31 PM


SweetieSue~
YES !
Thank you~

'Do not give up when life gets rough
Keep trying until you succeed
In getting where you want to be
You can plant your own little seed'


Yes you can !
I love the upbeat of this sweetie~
*BIG HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-08-21 11:16 PM


I just love the uplifting positive note in this poem, Sue...
I hope that things are going well with you.
~ loving hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-08-22 05:01 AM


there's that strength I knew was there, girl! Shine on and keep sharing these positive feelings.
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2002-08-22 07:18 AM



That's my gal, hold on to those positive thoughts my friend and you'll get where you wanna be.

Lots of hugs, I've so much respect for you dear lady

Many here will learn from your words

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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7 posted 2002-08-22 07:25 AM



Just want to say how right you are.
I was down for so long, but now I am on my feet, a bad marriage left behind and a brighter future ahead of me.
I wish you lots of luck, hopes and dreams.
May your life be all you want it to be.
(HUGS)

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

WhiteRose
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8 posted 2002-08-22 08:51 AM


This is a wonderful message for all of us Sue. It was great to come here this morning and read this. Especially posted by you dear lady who's lived it I'm sure. Great poem.
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9 posted 2002-10-17 02:37 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2002-12-31 02:22 AM


that's the way to see it!
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