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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-08-21 06:53 AM

cantilevered

can
tile
lever
shelves?

red
in the face
one gets
to put an end
to an end
where a life stays straight
and I see then an unswerving

when I see this word
two ends come to mind, holding up
a middle
of sway

mostly I think….

[………………bridges………………]
linking

one to another
day to dark
me to you

but then my mind works that way

never do I think of
cantilever
without the word
sway

perhaps I was too close to San Francisco
in another life

perhaps

it is because I sway in my mind
and cantilevered shelves

hold my thoughts
……………perhaps……………

~*~
repost from 5/2001

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-21-2002 10:09 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-08-21 07:09 AM

very clever, had to read it twice. I like this one!

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2002-08-21 09:54 AM

it is because I sway in my mind
and cantilevered shelves
....................

Karilea, this is exquisitely written...

Regards to you,
Sudhir

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-08-21 11:21 AM

Perhaps...you are one very clever poetess?
Yes!
No 'perhaps' about it...

~Hugs YOU!!~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-08-21 11:23 AM

Amazing concept. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-08-21 12:00 PM

(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is so very clever, yes, always organize your thoughts and hold them dear for they are precious things! (sigh) This is wonderful as always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-08-21 12:15 PM

Karilea

A thought filled poem...liked it!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-08-21 12:36 PM

You give architectural features and bridges a soft, swaying grace. How do you do that?

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