Open Poetry #22 |
Bluebirds |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(I have always loved bluebirds and all other beauties of nature so so much, they are soooooo adorable! Yay! ) Bluebirds By: Noah Eaton 8/18/02 Bluebirds twittering in the summer breeze Little girls in glass slippers skip-di-lou wherever they please Buzzing like the bumblebees Innocence shining even through the cold of night In every childs eyes Bluebirds flocking on the split-rail fence Raccoons eavesdropping through the camping tents Beneath where little chicks hatch in their warm snug nests Laughter echoing even through a January sunlight In every childs eyes Bluebirds warbling "She Wore A Yellow Ribbon" With beady puppy eyes of joy strewn with porcelain Every little boy's friend and the grace of every woman Where even the partridge family is invited in Nature's limousine And swim in lakes of dusty opal as Mother does her late spring cleaning Sister Cardinal and her family comes to visit With Brer Fox and Rabbit and Aunt Egret Among fawn-mingled clover fields lined with cinnamon Where a father and daughter go fishing The girl hugging her daddy under a dragonfly ceremony Bluebirds singing on my shoulder Ushering me in the beauty of the summer Where wild ponies gallop with manes glowing ever golder Playing duck, duck goose with the hummingbirds The tortoise jumping "Yay!" beating the hare on the speedway of Mother Nature Bluebirds twittering in the summer breeze Little girls in glass slippers skip-di-lou wherever they please Buzzing like the bumblebees Innocence shining even through the cold of night In every childs eyes This was all you needed To make this day fill you with delight... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-18-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Noah this is so beautiful! We don't have this kind of bluebird here.. We have the blue jays...but these are very special. I hope to see a real one, one day. ~Hugs from your sidekick~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely lovely photos sweet sweet words with playful childhood memories woven in Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awwww Noah, this is so sweet. I love birds and as my sister Enchantress said, we don't have blue birds of this type here in Southern Ontario. At least....I haven't seen any. But still, watching them splash in the birdbath, or teaching their young to take flight...wonderful! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very sweet. Very bluejay of you. Thanks for the read. |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
Wow, nice pics! This poem flow very nicely. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Looking forward to your next. "Aging keeps life interesting" |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah... A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed. This bird of blue into my window it flew This bird of blue sent by you...Paul |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
wow, Noah, what a 'tweet" poem (smiles) I loved the playful spirit in your wonderful poem..made me want to whistle a tune..big hugs to you Cher Poetry is: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! What images! I Love this work you've put together, and I love birds of all kinds...not to be biased. Great stuff here! You are very creative Noah. Continue to grow. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Really lovely, Noah. I enjoyed the photos, to go with your beautiful descriptions. Sandra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, this is outstanding and I adore the pictures of the blue birds. Living so close to the city, we don't get a huge variety of birds, most sparrows and crows and the ocassional cardinal. It was joyous to read about them and see their pictures. Thank you ... Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Oh Noah... this is so beautiful!!! I wish we had bluebirds here!!! Neeraja |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - these photos of bluebirds are just beautiful, as is this poem. One of my favorite birds. BC |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Fit for the season, Noah. Got a couple bird feeders in my yard, now if I could just keep the squirrels out of them! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Blue birds are a rare sight here in NW florida.It is a real joy when I see them.They are truly the bird of happiness. paladin |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
BlueBirds Once, when man was just a dream in God's eye He remorsed, for in his palette He was missing a color for happy so he released the BlueBird into the white canvas sky and swirled they did! Painting clouds with bluetail brushes and finally when man woke from his first sleep he looked up into the joy skies of heaven while a BlueBird painted his soul with joy jeff |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Absolutely beautiful, Noah! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
*huge smile* I couldn't help but thoroughly enjoy this sweet light-hearted piece. They are vivid aren't they? and leave a lasting impression. I truly enjoyed this very much Noah and the pictures were wonderful! Thank you! |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awwwwwwww, so cute, love it! SS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so cute, Noah... I love your photographs too... It looks like a little family of blue birds... Thanks for calling me tonight... ~ hugs from your chipmunk friend Lyra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is amazing and I have never seen one Noah. I loved the pics and your story woven throughout. I think this is my all time favorite of yours but then I am a sucker for birds too The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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