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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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0 posted 2002-10-12 01:58 AM


Who I am

Asking my self
Who I am
Feeling my heart confusing
Don’t know what I want
What I need
What I feel
Hating my self for while
Feeling jealous

Who I am
What I really want
What’s wrong with me
The heart is bleeding and bleeding
Needing once to immigrate

Who I am
Am I just a silly body
Without a soul
Wishing to live without a mind
To stop thinking and remembering
The pain memory
The old story

Who I am
My heart is wondering
While the eyes are shading a tears
When the life will end
When we can stop breathing
How our destiny will be
When our heart will leave his throbs

Who I am
Who I am inside
This is the word I am asking
To reach the answer of my wonders
Needing something
But what
I am here now
Can you see me now
Can you see how I am still a live
But who I am can you tell me
Did any body feels like I feel

Who I am
Why I have to be as I am
Questions always in mind
But normally we get used
At least I am still here as I am
The same situation of knowing who I am
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)






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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

1 posted 2002-10-12 07:18 PM


Interesting read!
The everpresent quest for identity, for reason to life, the Sartrean agony of the existential paradox which leads to the inevitable vertigo of indecision.

Thanks for sharing!

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