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clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
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canada.

0 posted 2002-10-11 10:15 AM


run off the walls
down the stairs two at a time
pretending your fine and
it's not the way you fall that
makes you beautiful it's your
eyes and the way your fingers move
and so you stick them down your
throat but choke, you choke and
you stutter with
your shaking body falls to
the cold hard floor
because your such a [edited by Moderator] wuss
to feel nothing that you feel everything
next time i won't
i won't choke.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-11-2002 10:19 AM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-10-11 10:24 AM


A powerful and emotional write...concerning and very real. Well expressed.  
Don't give up, don't give in...allow the healing. ThisDiamond

clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
Posts 106
canada.
2 posted 2002-10-11 10:41 AM


thank you
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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3 posted 2002-10-11 04:23 PM


Wow, dynamic writing!

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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