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| Open Poetry #22 |
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One more moment |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don’t go, please not just yet take my hand once more from the pen from the door move it to your heart or mine when they beat together when it wasn't cruel to be kind one more moment you, my poetry to feel your night on mine I need to touch you and know it’s for the last time Still, what had been shared, would not ever allow winter's regret to set in. Janet Marie [This message has been edited by Duncan (10-11-2002 01:14 AM).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
...you know, i'm going to have to stop reading you D. it interferes with my whole precess of healing. rofl. poignant. honest. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
C...exactly. Why would I want to suffer alone. Ain't no penicillin for this! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If you find the right combination of muse and medicine, let me know. I enjoyed this. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, this was very well written. I enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Love And Best Wishes To All, Ethel/garysgirl |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Duncan, I can feel your heart crying out in this, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and wishes for this moment to come to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
one more moment you, my poetry to feel your night on mine =============================== Im gonna have to ask Kit for a new icon ... something to represent "heart on sleeve" heart-hugs D mothyme |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
good stuff Duncan... seems the pain sometimes does not want to let us go... always enjoy the way you put the words down.. so BTW Iambe been by to visit you? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
one more moment you, my poetry to feel your night on mine I need to touch you and know it’s for the last time ------------------------------------------ Dang Duncan!! You have a way of grabbing at my emotions and not letting go... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You always paint so much feeling onto this blue canvas, and I can hear your heatbeat. |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
i can defintely relate to this one... i like |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
...when it wasn't cruel to be kind... without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Duncan, "Don't go, please Not just yet..." --I was really getting into this! EA |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is sad, Duncan... it reminds me of the last time I held my first husband's hand... as he lay dying... Thanks for sharing it with us ~ hugs and tearsLyra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sad... |
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