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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-10-11 01:08 AM



Don’t go, please
not just yet

take my hand
once more
from the pen
from the door

move it to your heart
or mine
when they beat together
when
it wasn't cruel to be kind

one more
moment

you, my poetry
to feel your night
on mine

I need to touch you
and know

it’s for the last time



Still, what had been shared, would not
ever allow winter's regret to set in.

Janet Marie

[This message has been edited by Duncan (10-11-2002 01:14 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2002-10-11 01:33 AM


...you know, i'm going to have to stop reading you D. it interferes with my whole precess of healing. rofl.

poignant. honest.


Duncan
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2 posted 2002-10-11 01:41 AM


C...exactly.  Why would I want to suffer alone.  
Ain't no penicillin for this!

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2002-10-11 03:05 AM


If you find the right combination of muse and medicine, let me know. I enjoyed this.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-11 03:16 AM


Duncan, this was very well written. I enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing.


Love And Best Wishes To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

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5 posted 2002-10-11 04:28 AM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Duncan, I can feel your heart crying out in this, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and wishes for this moment to come to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-10-11 07:54 AM


one more
moment

you, my poetry
to feel your night
on mine


===============================


Im gonna have to ask Kit for a new icon ...
something to represent "heart on sleeve"
heart-hugs D
mothyme

Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2002-10-11 08:10 AM


good stuff Duncan... seems the pain sometimes does not want to let us go...
always enjoy the way you put the words down..

so BTW Iambe been by to visit you?


Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-10-11 08:43 AM


one more
moment

you, my poetry
to feel your night
on mine

I need to touch you
and know

it’s for the last time
------------------------------------------
Dang Duncan!!  You have a way of grabbing at my emotions
and not letting go...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2002-10-11 10:08 AM


You always paint so much feeling onto this blue canvas, and I can hear your heatbeat.
clumsy
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10 posted 2002-10-11 10:13 AM


i can defintely relate to this one...
i like

regards2you
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11 posted 2002-10-11 10:54 AM


...when it wasn't cruel to be kind...

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-10-11 11:01 AM



Duncan, "Don't go, please
         Not just yet..."

--I was really getting into this!

EA


Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-10-12 11:44 PM


This is sad, Duncan... it reminds me of the last time I held my first husband's hand... as he lay dying...
Thanks for sharing it with us
~ hugs and tears

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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displaced
14 posted 2002-12-30 03:16 PM


this is sad...
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