Open Poetry #22 |
shadowspeak |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I won't pretend it doesn't hurt to know I've given you my all and know that I have come up short-- mere shadow toeing image tall... How is it there's so much of me-- unseen as the sun rides the sky? I watch you tread too carefully-- there is no soft-- no more of me-- that can break our fall. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hard to imagine you coming up short.... nicely written my friend and the pain perhaps behind it I hope find peace to also give it rest |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a plea for movement decision change there is nothing more for you you must SEE now very good, Karen b |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Serenity Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The cheer up brigade has arrived! Wha ... what? I said cheer up, not stirrup! They don't even sound close! Get those horses out of here! The ch --- THE CHEER UP! NOT THE CHAIR UP! PUT ME DOWN! No! I don't want a cherry! No! Not 7-up! The Chee.... NO CHEESE!!!! Oh, forget it! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This piece is so well done, I feel guilty for have enjoyed it so much. If you are writing about yourself my heart goes out to you. God Bless.... Warmly, Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I watch you tread too carefully-- there is no soft-- no more of me-- that can break our fall. Serenity - I have been there too. My wish for you is that one day YOU will have a "soft place to fall" and loving arms to lift you up. Very well written. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
there is no soft-- no more of me-- that can break our fall. ------------------------------------------ Excellent write here Karen! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Great poem. very sad. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Great write, witch But I believe, that it depends on who takes the inventory. ~Ed |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Superb! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all--there's a certain someone who has me playing with my um--words again... shadow's peak or shadow speaks...I couldn't decide so I stuck 'em together--thought I'd leave it up to you all. Thank you all so much! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket save it for a rainy day! Cheers! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! How do you write me like that? |
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