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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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MarganagraM ~*Marge Tindal*~ Lay of day with sun in shine Comes in sweet passage of time Drapes the meadow in yellow divine Sparkled rays repeat over the pine Dances the water in undulated play Cloaked in shadows of the silhouetted bay Frothy churn stirs ships in turn The rays of sun do brightly burn ~*~*~*~ (Sun in lay with shine of day) (Passage of time comes in sweet) (Divine yellow drapes in the meadow) (Over the pine, sparkled rays repeat) (Undulated, the water dances in play) (Cloaked in silhouetted shadows of the bay) (Ships in turn stir frothy churn) (Brightly the rays of sun do burn) ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul this is exquisite and I love it truly. YOU are one amazing writer, YOU know I love it don't you? Mmmmm of course as always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge you tickle my fancy with this (with this you tickle my fancy Marge.) couldn't help myself.....  Loved it hon. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I love the way you wrote this Marge. Love ya, Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ LOL ! I had such FUN with this little piece ... waiting for you girls to arrive I put this thought to pad ... and got so tickled when it materialized for me~ GentleSpirit~ LOL @ 'couldn't help myself'~ That's EXACTLY what I felt when I grabbed the title out in the yard ! Thanks, gal~ LonerGal~ Thanks so much, hon~ BettyBuddy~ You just gotta know I love you to pieces ! (I'm making some progress with the injuries, waiting for the MRI to be scheduled) Hey, think if my doctor prescribes 'patient poetry' I can get Cracker Barrel's risk management carrier to cover the cost of publishing ? Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: How clever and colorful! Much enjoyed! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Wrote it while waiting for those girls did you? Knowing you and knowing how late they came in, you probably wrote a whole bunch of them LOL It's just beautiful Marge. Hugs, wish I could have been there too, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Marge! This is wonderful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whole lot of reasons to enjoy this one!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Margie girl!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - my dear you are simply magical... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Truly, truly and totally amazing! Now I have to admit, it took me a few reads to figure this out, but once I did, I sat here wondering how on earth you came up with this concept. There must have been some magic in the air the day you wrote it. Hugs and congratulations on another fabulous piece of writing. Marti |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge you are simply a magic girl.....I love the clever presentation and the flow is wonderful. "Undulated, the water dances in play) (Cloaked in silhouetted shadows of the bay)" Oh if that ain't peaceful then I don't know what is! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This is so cute. I love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ya' know .... sometimes you have NO EARTHLY IDEA why a thought comes ... and yet you 'joy' in the fact that it did~ This is definitely one of 'those' times .. so, in retrospect ... I owe the gals a BIG THANK YOU for taking a wrong turn ! (fess up time ... when MarganagraM came to me ... I had to look up 'anagram' to be sure I could say what it wanted me to say ... Whew ... thank goodness it was okay !)  an·a·gram - n. A word or phrase formed by reordering the letters of another word or phrase ***Thanks, everyone~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
To wit, to woo! You never cease to amaze me! You play with words like no other! EA |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Marge! Well done! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
(Ships in turn stir frothy churn) (Brightly the rays of sun do burn) Absolutamundo! You are an artiste! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanking a certain friend <))>< for reminding me of this one today~  Soooooo fun to have done ... and thank you ALL for the kindness of your replies~ I need to head for the sandbox and see what drifts through my fingered thoughts~ Thankee lady~  *Huglets* ~*Me*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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