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Dawn's Breeze
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Dawn's Breeze |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Dawn’s breeze comes to your window. Lightly touching, tracing each curve, each valley, each junction of you. As I lay beside, watching, trembling as each hurried breath pushes the breeze away Does this breeze, so soft, unseen, unheard...feel? Can the touch that raises the skin in a tease...from beyond the dawn’s light excite and spur Lids quiver as lips move to a tongue’s trace ever lightly As winds blow the grains of vast plains So shall the breath of me bring to crest the waves of deepest passion crashing silently ashore as we share dawn’s breeze |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
racing the wind swimming against the current turning the tide It just shows you what a person can do when they put their mind to it! written with grace and aplomb, Magnus. jeff |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful this poem is Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Magnus, you devil you!!  Now I have to go to bed and try not to get excited by the breeze blowing through my windows!! You are ever the charmer with your softly caressing words. Keep it up, you darling man!! BTW- are you available to help the poetically challenged husbands who could most benifit from your arousing works of art?  Not that mine would..but it'd be worth a shot!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - soft breezes in the night, romance, a gentle woman, what more can someone ask for? BC |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Um Bill, how 'bout a gentle man? Romantic piece! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is so beautiful and sooooo romantic. Could you send that warm breeze here, it's freezing and the breeze is about 40 degrees! Hugs, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, How much better can you get? Well done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ This is just very, very lovely~ I'm with Seymour on this one~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Did you know that dawn is one those times where you can see the moon and the sun at the same time? Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can barely write a reply, I'm still "trembling"..... EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this is so beautiful. This is like a sweet love song. Thanks for sharing. With Love To All, Ethel/garysgirl |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may the draft always come in through your hearts open window and caress your heart with happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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