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ShadowRider
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0 posted 2002-10-09 10:47 PM


     Tennis is Love


     Six days a week, 10 hours a day
     Some called it work: I called it play
     With a choice of summer and a deep desire
     Learning tennis in snow-white attire.

     I spoke like a child and acted like a fool
     There on green clay, I was about to be schooled.
     As our team traveled the state, played the best
     Lost my share but also rose to the test

     My Dad, who never played, said he couldn’t lose
     I took that bet, wondering which tactic he’d choose
     But it wasn't what I expected, as shots hit the net
     He just stood his ground, grinding out each get.

     In my worse mistakes, he had some comment: wise
     He had wisdom for which I had no reply
     It was close, probably closer than he liked
     But I felt like my whole future was spiked.

     No matter how good you think you are
     there is always someone better
     I learned that lesson in spades
     right down to the last letter.

     The best doesn't always win,
     and the worst doesn’t always lose
     It's not in the talent
     and its not in the shoes.

     It's in the heart
     Winning is all about heart
     Off the court, or on
     Confidence is where to start
     but humility's where its won.

     He saw deep into my eyes that day
     I loved him all the more for it
     Roughing my hair he praised my play
     A humbled mask: and I wore it.

     I learned more that day, than ten years in any school
     Can't survive on talent for it's only just a tool
     winning is showing the world what you’re made of
     Sports are metaphors for life; and Tennis is all about Love


[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (10-09-2002 11:25 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-09 10:48 PM


Awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-10-09 10:54 PM


This is so true, Jeff....
I remember my late first husband having a fight with one of my sons about that very same subject...
He tried to teach them that being a good sport was better than being good at sports...
You did a real sporting job on this one
~ hugs from a sporty chipmunk

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-10-09 10:56 PM


Jeff,  if this is what can be learned by
playing tennis with a dad...Then let's all
get down to the store,  get a racket...and
go get wise...and humble...for that is what
life is about...wisdom and humility...go
hand in hand...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-09 11:07 PM




(big hugggssssss) Yes, the sports heroes I most admire are those who give it their best with heart and give to others with humility, like Kerri Strug and Jackie Robinson! I believe those like Mike Tyson or atheletes who hurt others or are gluttonous are no true sportsmen, sweet friend, this is well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-10-09 11:11 PM


ShadowRider - the heart is where it's at, as you have so written. Nice write about tennis, about love...

BC

ShadowRider
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6 posted 2002-10-09 11:23 PM


Thankx y'all.  I am still smiling at this self-parable, because.....well....
uh
HE WHOOPED MY BUTT!!

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