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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-10-09 09:44 PM

“MAGIC MOMENT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Soft whispers would
not come from me
to you this night, for
your eyes read silently
words from my muse
to wonder if they
tantalize, yet at the
same time you would
hear my breath in
softness, not to lose
its sound but be
everlasting, and as you
hear every sweet
sound it makes it
would rhyme with
a tender heart that
beats rapidly with
yours in unison, and as
they meet there is
suddenly a magic moment,
I find it enchanting, for
it did come without the
sound of a single word…
~~~~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2002-10-09 09:46 PM

very nice

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-09 10:05 PM

...EXQUISITE!!...

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-10-09 10:06 PM

that's the sound that everyone wants to hear. . .

great job BC. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-10-09 10:31 PM

Ahhhhh ... Enchantment in a magical moment. Just superb!

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

5 posted 2002-10-09 11:02 PM

Bill, that was masterful use of words!
Upon reflection of it, i see it was all one
run-on sentence that made perfect sense,
and broke the rules only to remake them.
jeff

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-10-09 11:04 PM

*sigh* Totally magical, Bill

~ smiling chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-09 11:05 PM

Bill, Such a loud voice of love......in silence. This is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-09-2002 11:06 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-10-09 11:16 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the new "flowing" style of your poems, they make such magic moments come alive, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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