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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20
Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

0 posted 2002-10-09 01:30 PM


You know
That just maybe
She is
That Rag doll
On that shelf
All by herself
Collecting cobbwebbs
And acquainting herself
With the dust
Over a thousand lifetimes
Not important
Echos through her mind
Intoxicated are her thoughts tonight
Alcholol coursing through
Her veins
Depression calling out her name
She slumps into an emotional coma
All by herself
Not important
Lights piercing her eyes
Men messing with the frequency
Of the radio station
Her soul is always tuned to
One after another
Bombarding
Her fragile state of mind
Liquid cocaine kisses
Careless rum caresses
Lost in a foreign embrace
Lapping up the innocence
Once again
On her shelf
All by herself
Not important
Only when she's
Making love
With the alcholol....



Consider yourself fuzzed

[This message has been edited by FuzzyFrazzledFraggle (10-09-2002 01:32 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-09 01:35 PM


Cool poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-10-10 12:49 PM


FuzzyFrazzledFraggle - I read your words and they tell a tale that should be given another go around...

BC

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-10-10 01:33 AM


Intoxicated are her thoughts tonight
Alcholol coursing through
Her veins
Depression calling out her name
She slumps into an emotional coma
All by herself
Not important

Damn, that's good.

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