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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-06 02:05 AM

You are a photograph of flame.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-10-06 02:24 AM

Very cool, Mike. Your love for her, I understand.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-10-06 02:32 AM

Short and sweet - packed with emotion.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-10-06 03:15 AM

Thank you, both. Just dredging up old ghosts. 'Cause I can!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2002-10-06 07:38 AM

THis one sparks off so many images, and alot of memories. It is amazing how sometimes one line can say it all.

El riesgo vive siempre!

[This message has been edited by brian madden (10-06-2002 07:40 AM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-10-06 09:39 AM

Awesome Mikey!! Perfect. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-10-06 09:47 AM

Please, please, puhleeze do NOT make this a challenge...because this is perfect!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-10-06 09:52 AM

...and you are a song of wind.

EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2002-10-06 11:08 AM

Wow! Really remarkable! Now I gotta figure out how to get my bottom jaw off my chest!

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

9 posted 2002-10-06 11:19 AM

This is my muse, not able to keep up with yours!! Wonderful simplicity, Mike!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-10-06 02:22 PM

Thank you, everyone.

And Kris, see, that's the problem:
your muse needs to be
a beautiful woman,
or the ocean,
not THAT weird thing.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-06 03:15 PM

You words are painting pictures in my mind.....................Hum-m-m-m-!!
Best wishes to all
Ethel/garysgirl

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

12 posted 2002-10-07 11:52 AM

Things that make you go H-u-m-m-m-m?

(ugh, sorry)

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

13 posted 2002-10-07 05:35 PM

one perfect sentence...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

14 posted 2002-10-07 06:46 PM

Thanks, Tier. That's all I could manage.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2002-10-07 07:06 PM

well... my memory of "her" would be different...

You are frostbite unhealed

Now...if things had been different...

a sparks shadow illuminated

(chuckling)..... just dropped in to read abit..and couldn't resist one liners...

Nicely stated my friend...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

16 posted 2002-10-07 07:19 PM

Thanks, Ron. Heh heh. It's hard to get meter to work when it's only one line.

YOU are a PHO-TO-graph of FLAME.

Four hard,
three soft.

I originally had You are a photograph of a flame,
but the "a" sounds like a skip in that case.

What did my teacher say long ago? Never let the readers see you sweat? LOL

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

17 posted 2002-10-08 02:57 PM

My delay reaction (I've been sick, hon, sorry):

Oh so yummy and beautiful. How d'ya pack so much into one line?

Oh, and hon...

New pic? Y' can never again deny you look 'xactly like Tyler.

I'm so going to have issues someday, aren't I?

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

18 posted 2002-10-08 03:14 PM

Glad yr feelin' better, babygrrl! I was gettin' worried...

Okay, okay, I concede I look A LITTLE like Tyler. But the eyes and our whole carriage are soooooo different!!!

I don't think he could sit through a movie like Fitzcarraldo, for one, where the only explosions are from dynamite, and with no fiery blooms resulting.

Nah, I like Tyler.

BUT I DON'T LOOK LIKE HIM!!!

Do ah?

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

19 posted 2002-10-08 03:18 PM

WOW!

I never thought one line would impress me as this one did!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

20 posted 2002-10-08 04:25 PM

Thank you, Sheri.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

21 posted 2002-10-09 06:18 PM

You have a wonderful way with words, Mr.Squirrel
You can spell beauty with a single line

~ wordy rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

22 posted 2002-10-09 09:14 PM

Mike, one line that packs so much....
yep, very cool

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

23 posted 2002-10-10 12:42 PM

Lyra,
It's great to see you again! I was gettin' worried.

Susan, much thanks.

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