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Open Poetry #22

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LiviEden
New Member

since 2002-10-03

Posts 3
In the Mist

0 posted 2002-10-09 12:43 PM

I freefall into pieces
Getting closer to numb
When I'm completely broken
This pain will be all done

The dance will never end, if it hasn't yet started.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2002-10-09 12:59 PM

I enjoy short poems like this that pack a lot into them. Bob

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-09 01:17 PM

Awesome words spoken here

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-09 02:24 PM

I do believe writers, and especially your type of writer, are far more resilient than the words you leave for us here. I am looking forward to more of your pen, please...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-09-2002 02:25 PM).]

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

4 posted 2002-10-10 12:54 PM

this one needs a bump.
Nice array of words!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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