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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-09 01:00 PM



Today the wind blew
the wild rose suffered
there on the shore
so vulnerable..unbuffered.
I watched as it's blossoms
broke..and flew apart
I felt the pain of loss
deep within my heart.
It's majestic scarlet pedals
littering the ground
so many gave up
without the slightest sound.
It whipped in the wind
it's beauty fading fast
I wondered how many flowers
would be strong enough to last.
As the wind died down
I walked to the shore
the mighty wild rose
still stood after the storm.
All it's beautiful blossoms
were gone..blown away
I cried for my giant
had it seen it's last day?
As I went to walk away
tears stinging my eyes
I saw a tiny rosebud
much to my surprise.
Buried deep inside
away from the winds rage
ready to bloom again
ready for a new day.
I walked away smiling
my wild rose still lives
it's beauty will return
it still has much to give.

WhiteRose

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-09 01:14 PM


Very beautiful. I like how descriptive this is.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-10-10 02:50 AM


Lovely...James
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-10 01:35 PM


A rose as seen through the eyes of a poetess.

You see the beauty inherent within, even when the bloom has gone.

Lovely

EA

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4 posted 2002-10-10 02:03 PM


Anne, this is so beautiful and so well done. There is much depth to this poem. I love it. Thanks for sharing your "roses" with us.

With Love To All,
Ethel

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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5 posted 2002-10-11 01:59 AM


Liked the imagery very much.
Thanks for sharing!
God Bless!

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