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| Open Poetry #22 |
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Don't Leave My Bungalow |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Big breasted ballooning belles Burgeon bouncing boyancies! Buffers buffed.... O bulky bulbs! Brimming in my Bungalow. Luscious Lucies tips of light As limpid as the lilies.... Lissome ladies linger long Leave my lowly thoughts aloft Brimming in my Bungalow Frailty are your bosomed frames True forms that found their freedom. Fabulous your fabrics made May they never ever fade Brimming in my Bungalow I found you with your fringes fraught And framed with flaunt and flourish. You flustered me into a flush So please don't ever try as much As to leave my Bungalow You flustered me into a flush So please don't ever try as much As to leave my Bungalow. [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-10-2002 11:18 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting play on sounds..and has a nosensical feel to the play on words. Yet... there seems more underneath as if in mocking... always enjoy the verse that makes me look...and think. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Hi! Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the feedback! |
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