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Traces Of You
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Traces Of You |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Traces Of You I reach out touch the images left on prints of yesterday. Memories soft as silk caress my mind and I drink them in like the most pleasurable bouquet of delights. Once again I feel that longing for the level of depth found within such a free spirit and I know that even without the picture held the heart would always hold traces of you. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-09-2002 12:35 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is so wonderful Donna. Soft with longing and remembrance. Very nice.  "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This made me think about how we'll all one day be remembered by those we leave behind. A lovely read, my friend. God bless! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Once again I feel that longing for the level of depth found within such a free spirit and I know that even without the picture held the heart would always hold traces of you. ----------------------------------------- Oh so very very beautiful Donna! Much enjoyed the read this sunny afternoon.. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may loves gentle images always fill your heart and make it skip heartbeats of happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these always stay. . . I've always wondered why. . . great work GS. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful, heartfelt words once again. hugs to you Donna. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - soft tender words. Traces, perhaps magical they are... BC |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Donna your poetry is like a pleasant perfume left behind on each passionate page. jeff |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, this is beautiful. Memories are so real. And the good ones are so precious. Thanks so much for sharing with us your gentle spirit. Love to All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-10-2002 12:32 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rose, thank you for the lovely reply. Michael as always dear friend, thank you. Nancy you are a dear, thank you. Hugs. Julie, thank you for stoppin by. Noah...... thank you for your genorisity. Hugs.Sven, yes they do have a way of staying with us. Thanks! Chris, you are so good to me, I thank you. Ah Bill, sometimes the traces are indeed magical. Thanks my friend, and hugs. Jeff, what a lovely thought and I thank you dearly for it. Ethel, indeed they are precious! Thank you so much. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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