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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-08 11:09 PM



You want the shade of black
upon words that threaten
to burst with color,
bright, upon eye that see.

You cannot have it thus. Not me.
I, with colors rainbowed many
will use a palette filled.
To paint of life, stilled.
Captured on page, words will
rage. Canvas in array,
in color I display.

You'll never understand, for you
have not my hands, my mind
or thoughts. Don't feign
distraught. My world
will not be shadowed.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-08-2002 11:10 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-08 11:12 PM


I feel a lot of emotion in this piece. Very well done.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-10-09 01:58 AM


Anne, this is a good poem. You did paint a picture with many colors. Thanks for sharing.

With Love To All,
Ethel

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-10-10 12:37 PM


You'll never understand, for you
have not my hands, my mind
or thoughts

I appreciate your honest expression very much.  You're no carbon copy Rosey~

This was just grand, really it was!

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