Open Poetry #22 |
Skippin Stones |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Skippin stones across the edge of waters that held the dreams of youth. In our laughter we were young going through the seasons of change. The sparkle upon the water broken by the slightest disturbance rocks thrown releasing ripples upon the ponds of eternity and reflections of surrounding life become distorted what started as a small ripple upon calm waters spread out into never ending circles of life until just like the dreams of youth they faded into today. Today I stand here pick up the rock check to make sure it is polished to perfection and send it skipping I watch the ripples grow and again I see my dreams..........sail~ If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-09-2002 11:59 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A very good write, I enjoyed the read very much. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now how did you know that my tomboy self slipped stones from atop a shelf of rock and stone where I'd grown... to skip them across the watery shore, then went looking for more, and more... now, how did you know? |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Never could get the hang of it. Enjoyed the read though and the vision it created. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
We have to skip shells here, but the effect is the same. Very pretty, Donna! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I watch the ripples grow and again I see my dreams..........sail~ ------------------------------------------- Very very beautiful Donna! And...you know I have to love the presentation. Extremely well done...hugs sweetie! ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, I love skipping rocks on the ocean and I remember when I was six and my dad taught me how to do it, though I am not nearly as good as him! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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