The Pure Blue Flame Of Fire

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Open Poetry #22

The Pure Blue Flame Of Fire

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-09 12:45 PM

The Pure Blue Flame Of Fire

tonight I lit a candle
and fell into your words
reading ageless beauty
to where my soul was stirred
the sense of its power
the sheer magic that I yearn
from a place of coldness
to crawl closer to your burn
when I touched the page
it browned from singe
like when a flame
touches edges fringe
arousals flaming words flow
they start to furl
and inside of me
a part of me bends in curl
blazing in this beauty
as I read on I know desire
I have stepped into
the pure blue flame of fire

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-09 01:08 AM

Helen, this is so good. I love your style of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2002-10-09 10:13 AM

Helen ..... I am surprised to find that my post is but the second. This poem is nicely done. A lovely picture. Bob

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-10-09 10:23 AM

Excellent, I love the way you write and always look forward to your words.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-10-09 12:43 PM

The purity of heat translates.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-10-09 02:52 PM

As you state so well, the heat and the flame...together from outside and inside...
Excellent. ThisDiamond

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2002-10-10 06:04 AM

"when I touched the page
it browned from singe"

Wonderful images!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2002-10-10 08:14 AM

Beautiful...the candle of passion ignites love's energy...

...believe what your heart feels.....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-10-10 08:21 AM

like this Helen... like it a lot....

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