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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2002-10-09 12:45 PM



The Pure Blue Flame Of Fire


tonight I lit a candle
and fell into your words
reading ageless beauty
to where my soul was stirred
the sense of its power
the sheer magic that I yearn
from a place of coldness
to crawl closer to your burn
when I touched the page
it browned from singe
like when a flame
touches edges fringe
arousals flaming words flow
they start to furl
and inside of me
a part of me bends in curl
blazing in this beauty
as I read on I know desire
I have stepped into
the pure blue flame of fire

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-09 01:08 AM


Helen, this is so good. I love your style of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

RMW
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2 posted 2002-10-09 10:13 AM


Helen ..... I am surprised to find that my post is but the second. This poem is nicely done. A lovely picture. Bob
NewEnglandlazurlu
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3 posted 2002-10-09 10:23 AM


Excellent, I love the way you write and always look forward to your words.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Moonlight Romeo
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4 posted 2002-10-09 12:43 PM


The purity of heat translates.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-10-09 02:52 PM


As you state so well, the heat and the flame...together from outside and inside...
Excellent. ThisDiamond

Sandpiper
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6 posted 2002-10-10 06:04 AM


"when I touched the page
it browned from singe"

Wonderful images!

scorpio
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7 posted 2002-10-10 08:14 AM


Beautiful...the candle of passion ignites love's energy...

...believe what your heart feels.....

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8 posted 2002-10-10 08:21 AM


like this Helen... like it a lot....


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