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Stomp The Grapes In Passion's Vat
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Stomp The Grapes In Passion's Vat |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Palms of your walk sway slowly into the sight of me as my breath rasps... As I sigh softly.. Dancing water’s light flickering in your sparkle bathe me in the desire of you...as I sigh longingly again... Drums echo my ears of a heart racing a last mile.... Hoping to touch the softness of satin’s flesh curved in the hills of lace and flower’s scent.. As the blood of a lip bit awaits the taste of your wine.. Come, stomp the grapes of desire in the vat of our passion.. While candles flicker and fingers trace the lace of you....as you again... trace the lace of me.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words always flitter like the curtain lace in a cool breeze near an open window, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-08-2002 09:38 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
* SIGH* Ooooooh myyyy Yessssss!! ~ Hugs & Smiles ~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That doesn't sound like Mogen David to me!!  You're in the right place, Barry. We have no lack of whiners  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A million sighs.....wow Barry...tis a lovely poem to read.... hugsssLauren~ I need some distraction |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I must disclose something to you, I'm actually wearing a lace trimmed negligee so you can imagine how this poem affected me!... OOO, la la, la la... EA |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Aloha, Barry...you are still whelming us with your words...this was another wonderful poem and the style is getting sweeter and sweeter I hope to see more of these romantic poems from you... hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Good write Maggie...(don't worry yourself with Earth Angel...I'll go see what she needs) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, yet another picture you have painted in my mind, and put music in my ears. very beautiful work, as usual. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You are such a tender romantic! Sigh is right. I thought, by the title, that this was going to be some metaphor about Passion's poets making wine with their poetry.  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I don't know Barry you are piling up the sighs. What are you going to do with them? Wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What can I say?...The master! Beautiful pictures here Barry. ThisDiamond |
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