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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2002-09-21 10:23 AM

i'd like to say
     i love the girl
but my heart wont embrace
the word

she fills the spaces
of lonliness
her presence can be heard

her chatter, her pitter-patter
in the morning
when we rise

in the darkness of the night
her breath, her touch,
her sighs

but love is something
i left behind
when it slipped
out of my  hands

     the day we parted,
     love and i,
     was the day we slipped off
     our bands

i dont know
how to tie a bow
another knot i'll tie

for lonliness and i
arent friends
i'd rather live on the wings
of a lie

i'd like to say
i love the girl
but my heart wont play the part

so i'll drink of this cup
and swallow it hard
and throw another dart

they say love comes
     to those who wait...

sometimes love goes
     from those who hesitate...

-dgvarner
9-21-02
(written for a friend)

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (09-21-2002 10:25 AM).]

Kit McCallum

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1 posted 2002-09-21 10:47 AM

"they say love comes
      to those who wait...

sometimes love goes
      from those who hesitate..."

There is much wisdom and tenderness in this piece ... a lovely delicate write, from the heart. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-09-21 10:52 AM

DG~
Good morning gal~

'i dont know
how to tie a bow
another knot i'll tie'

Those 'knots' help us hold on to love just a little bit longer~
Never knowing if the 'friend' feels the lifeline of our hearts~
But .... knowing we throw it out for them to grasp~

This is really a tender write~
For I know your heart is in it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-09-21 01:24 PM

Gale~
Wow...this was a hard one to read for so many reasons.
I know you understand all of them...all too well.
I hope you showed this to your 'friend' and that
he accepted it in the spirit in which it was intended.
All my love and *BIG HUGS* to both of you.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-21 02:16 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2002-09-21 07:19 PM

KIT..yes..from the heart it was..thank you much for reading..
MARGIE..thank you miss margie..
VICK..no..i didnt show it to him..maybe one day..just dont want it to be found by the one who wouldnt understand it..

thanks for feeling it with me..

LONER23..thank you..

hugs, g

"There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-21 08:24 PM

"they say love comes
     to those who wait...

sometimes love goes
     from those who hesitate..."

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Debbie, this is such a sad but wonderful and wise piece, sweet friend, I know this will touch your friends heart as you shine with such compassion, God Bless You, my heart goes out to your friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2002-09-21 11:21 PM

When one reads your words one can’t help but feel, a great write my friend, well done.

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

8 posted 2002-09-22 12:11 PM

You made this kind of heartbreak so very real, DV...
Thanks for sharing it.

~ warm hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Parker
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9 posted 2002-09-22 10:01 PM

dg, this is so good.... a brilliant piece. the truth is so thick in this... It probably relates to so many of us. You sure can have a powerful muse at time.

parker

Nightshade

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just out of reach

10 posted 2002-09-22 10:26 PM

I really enjoyed this heartfelt write. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

dgvarner
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Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2002-09-23 01:05 AM

NOAH..wise?  me?  lol  thanks my friend..
EDDIE..thank you for feeling with me.. have missed you feeling with me!  lol
MADAME C..the heartbreak is indeed very real..i hope he can find that he DOES love her...time will tell..

PARKER..brilliant?? wow..i'll keep you and noah around..you guys think i'm wise AND brilliant!

  thanks my friend..
CHRIS..thank you for enjoying..

thanks much for reading..some things just feel better when shared..

hugs, g

ps..VICK..i shared it with him..its a 'good thing' that he and i are the friends we've turned out to be...

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (09-23-2002 01:07 AM).]

Fuji
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since 2002-09-23

Posts 26

12 posted 2002-09-23 04:05 AM

I enjoyed your poem very much.
Only I felt rushed at the very end.
I expected more would come, but I was brought to a sudden stop.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

13 posted 2002-09-23 10:42 PM

FUJI..thanks, glad you enjoyed it..

i'm not sure why it feels rushed at the end--thats actually where i slow down in my reading.....lol but thank you for your input..

hugs, g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown

Parker
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14 posted 2002-10-07 06:01 PM

this piece needs another read.... the last line should be my bumper sticker...lol

Parker

AniKay83
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Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

15 posted 2002-10-07 08:28 PM

but love is something
i left behind
when it slipped
out of my  hands

     the day we parted,
     love and i,
     was the day we slipped off
     our bands
=============================================
I can identify with this. As I write this I am wearing a friendship bracelet of the most beautiful friend I ever chanced to meet. Though lately we seem to be growing apart and I am not so sure if I love her anymore. Even if I want so very badly to love her the way I did when we first found friendship in each other. This touched me on a very personal level. Thanks for sharing.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

[This message has been edited by AniKay83 (10-07-2002 08:29 PM).]

Balladeer

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16 posted 2002-10-07 09:04 PM

Beautiful writing, Gale. I'm sorry we didn't get a chance to meet in Tampa

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

17 posted 2002-10-08 10:58 AM

Beautiful penned!

((hugs))
Charisma

Midnitesun

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Gaia

18 posted 2002-10-08 12:24 PM

Wow, I sure hope this one reached the heart of the subject.
Missed you here lately!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

19 posted 2002-10-08 04:42 PM

This is so moving. So emotional. So real!

EA

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

20 posted 2002-10-09 12:45 PM

PARKER..thank you for the second round..

LOL@you--i'll see if i can find you a bumper sticker....!
KRISSIE..i'm sorry to hear of your friendship slipping away...it brings me great sorrow to 'lose people'..sometimes things go wrong in one persons life and they just dont know how to bring someone else in to help them along with it...until they learn to love themselves again, they may forget the love you have given...give it time...and patience...

thanks for reading!
'DEER..i wish i couldve made it to tampa too!!! i did go to busch gardens that saturday...then realized you folks went to cypress gardens! LOL..imagine my 'oops face' when i figured THAT out! teehee...oh well..i tried...couldnt cancel my busch trip by the time i realized my mistake...
thanks for reading!
CHARISMA..i thank you friend poet..

MIDNITESUN..it did reach him..and he agrees with "parts of it"...lol..as my 'ex-hubby' i didnt imagine he would agree with all of it..but i'm glad we are friends enough that i could share my observations/perceptions with him..
thank you for missing me! lol..and for reading!
EARTHANGEL..thank you much for enthusiastic reply!

hugs, g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown

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