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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-08 04:03 PM


Sometimes it can be easy
Sometimes hard
Sometimes you want to get out of it
Sometimes you think
How stupid was I for doing this

He keeps telling you thing
Which he has never acted on
In the year you have been together
And keeps begging you
Not to give up on him
That it is hard to find a job where he lives

Well now it is over a year
Since you meet him
And you haven't given up hope
You strive
To still believe
What he says

Now he is bringing his friend
Into the equation
Which means less time for you and him
But he keeps saying
I will be on in the afternoon
And the evenings
And sometimes even the mornings
But you know well enough
If it is his friend
That will not hold up

So I guess
This is what long distance love
Is and always will be

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Auguste
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1 posted 2002-10-08 04:15 PM


Long distance love is always hard, but I do wish you the best.  

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-08 10:26 PM




(sigh) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, long distance love is such a bittersweet story and I still yearn for my Joanna so much as she is still working hard many days! (big hugggssssss) Here's wishing you the best, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2002-10-08 11:12 PM


the_loner_23 - a long distance one is difficult but it can perservere. Best to you...

BC

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4 posted 2002-10-09 12:05 PM


Julie,
this is very good.
Thanks for sharing.

With Love and Best Wishes,
Ethel

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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Grean Earth ,,,
5 posted 2002-10-09 12:59 PM


Well, I understand you dear friend.. I really love your words...
Very nice poems..

Hugesss
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
6 posted 2002-10-09 06:10 PM


It can work, Julie...
David and I got started that way, and we've been married for almost a year now...
It takes patience though...
I wish you luck
~ grinning chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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